Pervy-Dan-Hibiki's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Poison]

I love it when she doesn't have a big ol' peener. ^.^

[S<3T: Tangled Garden]

I think this hast to be my favorite peice by you. I love, love, LOVE the detail in the clothes.

Also, Not only has "thehoard" never seen balls, he probably has never seen a vagina either if that's what he's mistaking for balls.

DeliciousOrange responds:

I'm glad you like it, Slug made it really easy to make her look great.

I always find it amusing to imagine how it can be possible to not recognize either set of genitals; one would imagine that by simple process of elimination you could figure out which is which, but I guess not everyone is familiar with their own anatomy.

[Fuuka, Fuuka!]

Those oversized boobs aren't my thing at all, but the whole thing is done so well I can't help but give it a 5.

[things...]

It's tough being the strongest, Cirno. I completely understand. I have the same problem.

[Rikka]

My fuckin' god she is cute. She was cute in the show, no doubt, but here you've not only met that but exceeded the cuteness she originally had. Great work!

[Pink In White (Project)]

Bravo! Clap, clap, clap, clap.

I love this one. I'm not even going to bother explaining what it is that i love about it, because it'd take to long. All of it is just awesome!

300300 responds:

Thanks ;) Glad you like it

[Kitteh]

The shoulders are a little boney but otherwise I love it ^.^

[I'm terribad with naming stuff]

Love it. She's cute, I like the houses on floating islands, but I wish it was colored :/

Name suggestion:
"Freedom on the Wings of Ducks"

[A Nervous Bow]

I read the comment of the guy two bwelow me. He's right about the anatomy, but I don't really think it's the lighting effect that's the problem, it's that you don't have the shading to go with it. On her skin and hair you need the shading to be darker, for sure. And you've got to learn how to use hard and soft shadows appropriately. The hair especially would look much better if you used harder shadows. Also, the shadows you do have don't go with where the light is coming from. Look at her skirt, for example, It's like each of the pleats are lighted individually with the light pointing directly at them. With the the placement of the window, the area on her right should be almost completely shaded. Really, I think you should not use the blur tool so much. It's VERY useful, but not everything needs to be blurred. Though if you want to soften the edge of the shadows or something, that's fine, just use a really small brush. I can't really say what size to use, since I don't know what size the image is originally. Mine is usually like 20 point to soften the edges, but my pictures are at over 4000 x 2000 at the time.

[pokedexxed challenge metagross]

Steel Sucks... but that's probably because half my party is fire type, so I'm used to destroying steel types.

Anyway, great job. I've always like metagross's design. I love that you made im more steel comlored, instead of his normal blue color.

megadrivesonic responds:

thanks, i think the more steel look is the result of using the marker tool in sai