Pervy-Dan-Hibiki's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fuuka, Fuuka!]

Those oversized boobs aren't my thing at all, but the whole thing is done so well I can't help but give it a 5.

[things...]

It's tough being the strongest, Cirno. I completely understand. I have the same problem.

[Rikka]

My fuckin' god she is cute. She was cute in the show, no doubt, but here you've not only met that but exceeded the cuteness she originally had. Great work!

[A Nervous Bow]

I read the comment of the guy two bwelow me. He's right about the anatomy, but I don't really think it's the lighting effect that's the problem, it's that you don't have the shading to go with it. On her skin and hair you need the shading to be darker, for sure. And you've got to learn how to use hard and soft shadows appropriately. The hair especially would look much better if you used harder shadows. Also, the shadows you do have don't go with where the light is coming from. Look at her skirt, for example, It's like each of the pleats are lighted individually with the light pointing directly at them. With the the placement of the window, the area on her right should be almost completely shaded. Really, I think you should not use the blur tool so much. It's VERY useful, but not everything needs to be blurred. Though if you want to soften the edge of the shadows or something, that's fine, just use a really small brush. I can't really say what size to use, since I don't know what size the image is originally. Mine is usually like 20 point to soften the edges, but my pictures are at over 4000 x 2000 at the time.

[pokedexxed challenge metagross]

Steel Sucks... but that's probably because half my party is fire type, so I'm used to destroying steel types.

Anyway, great job. I've always like metagross's design. I love that you made im more steel comlored, instead of his normal blue color.

megadrivesonic responds:

thanks, i think the more steel look is the result of using the marker tool in sai

[Giant Robot]

That is one adorably destructive son of a bitch.

[Emergency]

I love the colors. it kinda gives a sorta "Heavy Metal" / 80's vibe to it.

[The Hit]

I was wondering "What kind of idiot parks their Bugatti in a shady ass place like that" but then I read the text.

I love this piece. I love the colors. I love the subject matter. I LOVE the amount of detail. I can only hope to one day reach half this level of detail in my own work.

EchoCharlieDelta responds:

The piece-of-shit kind that may of messed with the mob the wrong way.

I'm sure you will, if you see my earlier works, my game really only picked up in 2012. Feel free to PM me if you need any tips/advice or you can check out echocharliedelta.com for advice/breakdowns on producing narrative in images, as well as making them or techniques used to make them.